Tuesday, February 27, 2007

They say absense makes the heart grow fonder!

Did you miss me? Right, I didn't think so. Anyway, sorry I've been so quiet on the blog front. Have some personal issues I'm dealing with, not to mention getting a synopsis written for Caddy-Did. I did get back on track yesterday and wrote 3 pages. I am now officially over half done with the book. I know how the rest of the story will progress, just have to write it. Kent has been really good. I'm very proud of him--maybe a tab bit in-love with him as well, but don't tell Cadence that. I seem to fall a little bit for all my men, thought Nick Trent is still the love of my life--besides my husband, of course. I see a lot of Nick in Kent. Both easygoing guys looking for a good time. Then I go and stick them with uptight women. Rubbing hands together with glee. I love conflict. Lots of it.

I wanted to mention a book I'm almost finished with, The Bounty, by Beth Williamson. I had started it a few months ago, but got sidetracked. Picked it up again two days ago and have had a hard time putting it down. Tyler is a hunky Bounty Hunter, and Nicky is his bounty. Too, too, good, Beth. I'll probably finish it today. With this story, I had no problem turning off my internal editor, the writing is wonderful. I loved both characters and was touched by Nicky's love for her twin-brother Logan who was killed. I'd definitely give The Bounty two-thumbs up! And, a couple of snaps for good measure.

I better get to work. I need to write at least 3 pages today. You all have a wonderful Tuesday. Oh, and think all positive thoughts!

Jerri

Tuesday, February 13, 2007

Sorry, haven't had much to say.


I'm a writer and I've drawn a blank. Talk about trouble. What do you do when this happens? I've been at a loss for words for about a week now. Okay, it all stems from behind-the-scenes stuff. It's hard to get into writing when everything seems strained in your life. I did get a new editor over the weekend and she seems super nice--that's one good thing.

Right now, Kent is bugging me to death. "Why am I sitting in this car? You know I'm all hot and bothered from Cadence, and need a cold shower. You seem damned content to leave me here in pain."
"Sorry," I tell him, "but I need some motivation, and can't find any.
"Aren't I motivation enough," he asks, his lips curling into a grin. "I'll let you watch me take a shower."
Well, that would be exciting.
"What, that's not enough incentive? How about I promise to give you a show."
See what I have to put up with. The man in a pain--a really thorn in the backside. He's just lucky he's as cute as he is, otherwise I'd have to hit him.
"Come on," he whined. "I want to get into the action. That is what you write, right? Hell, Thorn and Ava got their adventure in the Bayou. Yancy and Mauve got shot at, at the airport. When is it going to be my turn."
I looked at him as if he'd lost his mind. "But you were shot in Mauvelous, remember?"
"True, but I want the focus on me this time. I don't want to be just a bit player. Its my turn to be the hero, to show Cadence why I'm a better man than Yancy."
I shook my head and wondered why I hadn't chosen someone else to be my male character.
As if he'd read my mind, he turns and stalks off. "See if I ever come out of the car now."

He's pissed, but he'll get over it.

Anyway, if you want to help. Give me a list of words to use in my next scene, and if it works, I'll post some of it to my next blog.

Have a nice day...the weather here is nasty and is only supposed to get worse as the day unfolds. Looking forward to it. NOT!

Jerri

JENNIFER and JENNAH, YOU'RE BOTH WINNERS. For helping me, you're going to get your choice of three books.


Agent in Training

http://www.triskelionpublishing.com/Product61143/Agent_in_Training_by_Jerri_A._Drennen.html?CategoryID=2916&Index=1

Saving Grace

http://www.loose-id.com/detail.aspx?ID=264

Fire & Ice

http://www.mybookstoreandmore.com/product_info.php?products_id=260

e-mail me at jdnovelist@hotmail.com and let me know which PDF you'd like. Oh, I'll try to use as many of your words as I can, and post some of the scene. Thank you so much!

Monday, February 05, 2007

Half complete!

Yep, I'm halfway finished with Caddy-Did. I'm really working hard on getting this book done as quickly as I can. The next book, Paid in Full will be a Blaze type story, and I'm gearing up to write it. Jesse Duncan is my hero, Elizabeth Gilmore the heroine. I think it'll be a blast to work on something completely different than I've done before. Also, I'm going to go back and rework Photographic Memories. It's a very strong romantic suspense. I just need to do some revisions, and finish it up.

Here is the beginning of Photographic Memories.

Detective Trisha Brent stepped over the yellow tape staked out over a marshy field and almost lost her footing in the thick, murky sludge. She grimaced and shook the foul substance from her shoe, only to splatter it on her beige slacks.

“Son of a—”

Why did this always happen to her? She should have worn boots, or a bikini.

Lightning flashed off in the distance, followed by a boom of thunder. The threatening sky had Trisha’s nerves on edge for more than just the obvious reasons—losing evidence. Rain was forecasted for the next eight to twelve hours, so the forensics team would have a small window of opportunity to process the scene before the sky opened up again.

Trish sloshed down the steep incline to the body that lay draped with a gray blanket.

“What do we have?” she asked the detective standing next to the body.

“White female. In her twenties. Extensive bruising around the throat. Cause of death looks to be strangulation. The killer was strong too. He left finger depressions in the skin. Blood was found under her nails, so I bagged her hands.”

“Good work. What does it look like, murdered here or dumped?” Trisha peered around the field, trying to put herself in the mindset of a killer. One thing was certain, the rural, overgrown terrain was perfect for hiding a body.

Detective Warren cleared his throat and shifted his stocky weight, nodding toward the road. “On the way down, I noticed a narrow path where the vegetation was flattened, consistent with something being dragged. It started from the top of the incline. I'd say she was killed somewhere else, then brought here.” He took a weary breath and shook his balding head, glancing at his notes. “A Mr. Winston’s retriever came across the body. The man had released the dog from his leash, and found him barking next to the woman.”
“Anything else?”

“She’s partially nude. From the waist down,” Warren said, then cleared his throat again. “But we'll have to wait for the Medical Examiner to tell us if she was raped or not. We found no visible signs of semen on her clothes or body, but the rain from earlier could have washed it away. He’s en route now. He'll be able to better determine how long she's been dead. If I had to hazard a guess, though, I'd say less than twenty-four hours.”

The information about possible rape brought a realm of unsettling memories back to Trisha, and sent a cold chill skittering down her backbone.

She studied the surrounding area again, swallowing back the bitter taste of acid that had worked its way up her throat. Eight years suddenly evaporated, and with it came a similar place, an uncanny dank odor. The only thing missing, the strong, copper smell of blood. Hers.

She shivered at the memory. Push the past away, Trish. All you need is to show weakness around the men you work with.

“Detective Brent,” an officer called from above the embankment. “We got a purse up here.”

Maybe luck would be on their side in this case. “Great. Bring it down.” Could the bag belong to the victim? Trisha sure as hell hoped so.

Being with the Special Victims Unit was not an easy job, most of the time she dealt with dead bodies, not living, breathing people in which happy ending could be found. But then, fairy tales were for those with rose-colored glasses.
She hadn’t donned a pair in years.

Her cases were horrific and sad in so many ways. Her unit, responsible for informing loved ones that their sons, daughters, wife’s, mothers were dead, difficult on a good day, downright heart-wrenching when the victims were young and had their whole lives ahead of them.

“Detective?” The approaching officer held out a brown handbag, the smell of wet leather mingling with the musty, stale air.

Trisha pulled a pair of latex gloves from her jacket pocket and snapped them on, then took the purse. Viable prints could be anywhere. With care, she opened the flap, finding a matching wallet inside. She pulled the clutch out and flipped it open. The woman's New Mexico driver's license fit snugly inside a plastic holder.

Trisha flashed Detective Warren the picture. “Is this our victim?”

He glanced at the photo. “Yeah, that's her.”

Dupont, Elizabeth Jo. 240 Weldon Hills. Birth date, 3-27-81.

That would make her twenty-five, not much more than a child in Trisha’s book.
Ten years had passed since she’d been that age.

In the last decade, Trisha had witnessed things most people would be sickened by, but somehow, she’d gotten used to seeing the worst that society had to offer. Any more, it was just another day, another dead body.

Trisha sighed and forced her mind back to the job at hand.

Vital Statistics: Hair: Blonde. Eyes: Blue. Height: 5' 8'' Weight: 125.

She closed the wallet, placed it back into the purse and rifled inside again, coming across a Santa Fe Inn room key.

What a dive. By reputation alone, Trisha knew the motel was one of the worst in the city. They had hourly rates. Perfect for hookers and their clientele to take care of business.

Trisha frown. Already, some facts in this case didn’t fit. According to the woman’s license she lived a few miles from where her body now lay. So why would she have a motel key in her purse? From across town? The whole thing made no sense, unless the woman was a prostitute, herself, and had been servicing a John at the motel. Boy, if that were the case, they’d have to interrogate half the male population of Santa Fe.

Wednesday, January 31, 2007

What mades a hero a hero?

I've really been thinking about this the last 3 or 4 days. See, I was told that my hero Kent wasn't hero material in chapter one. This bothered me enough to stop my writing. Does he have to show hero qualities in the first chapter? Does he have to show them by chapter 6. What would be the challenge in writing a story where the characters are perfect from the beginning? Eeks! Where is the conflict? Where is the character growth? Here's the thing--there is no such thing as a perfect man--please. If there were, he'd be as boring as the day is long. Beside, all my favorite characters on TV are far from heroic. "House" Talk about a man who is far from heroic, yet he does heroic things--he saves lives. I've been thinking about this long and hard. All the really memorable characters I can think of haven't been heroic, yet manage to endear themself to people anyway. Why is that, do you think? I know I'm doing the right thing with Kent. Now, I just have to convince my subconscious of that, and get back on the horse, prove that he will be a hero in the end--at least to me and Cadence.

What do you think? What constitutes a hero in your mind? Does he have to be loveable from beginning to end? Think about the characters on TV that you've loved. Were they perfect from the start or did they need character building, need a woman to soften up the edges for them? What about Spike and Angel off of Buffy? Were they heroic? Not from the beginning, but I fell in love with Spike anyway. I guess I just love bad boys, and prefer to write them as well. Sue me.

Jerri

Saturday, January 27, 2007

I'm still writing!


Unbelievable, isn't it? I've written over 7,000 words since I started. Only 18,000 to go in Caddy-Did. I plan to have this book done by the end of Febuary, maybe even sooner.

You know, I've been really insecure lately about my writing, but I've decided to stop being that way. It's stupid. I've been working hard on my craft for seven years now. I'm worthy and it's time to think positive. Since I've been published, I've gotten a lot of great reviews. The harsh ones for awhile outweighed the good, but no more. Even in one of the not so stellar reviews, the gal said I had great character. Yep. I can write 3 dimensional characters like no one elses business, ones you'd love to know yourself. I don't write overly sexy stories, just two people who fall in love, and then make love. I think you have to have some sort of emotional connection between your characters before sex is introduced. That to me is romance. How do you feel? Need more than just sex?

Have a wonderful day. I'm off to work. Yancy and Mauve are getting married today! Kent and Cadence are invited, and going together. Can you see trouble? I can.

Jerri

Friday, January 19, 2007

I'm on a roll!


Since last wednesday I've written over 5,000 words. To some, that might now sound like a lot, but for me, it's a miracle. I love my characters. They remind me a bit of Nick and Shiloh of Agent in Training. If I keep this pace, I'll be done with Caddy-Did in a little over a month. Then off to work on my steamy romance.

Teaser from Caddy-Did.

"Because, you stuck me with that dominating blonde for the next month. I had to spend my last night of freedom with someone who wouldn’t make me feel as if I was chained to something, being whipped into submission."
David’s eyes widened, and indicated to something over Kent’s shoulder.
The gesture itself told Kent someone was behind him, and had heard everything. He turned.
In the doorway, her cheeks flushed a rosy color, stood Cadence Fleming.
Talk about sticking your foot in it. Why did she have to hear what he said? Now things would be worse than before, and, before was bad.
"Cadence." David jumped up to meet her at the door. "I’m glad you’re here. We need to go over what you’ll be doing for the next month."
Kent watched her from the corner of his eye, her if-looks-could-kill glare toward him not going unnoticed. She disliked him, and that wasn’t going to make training her easy—not one bit.
David led her to the table. "Kent will be teaching you everything he knows in the next four-weeks. I'm positive with him showing you the ropes, you’ll be ready for anything that’s thrown at you."
She looked squarely at Kent, her turquoise eyes darkening. "Does that include verbal bashing?"


Anyway, I'm off to write. Have a fantastic day.

Jerri

Sunday, January 14, 2007

So far so good!


So, I started the 500 word a day challenge and I've done really well. I actually went over 500 every day and am happy to be writing on a regular basis again. I've finished the first chapter of Caddy-Did and almost the second. I totally love Kent--he is so funny. I love writing a character that doesn't have angst. None whatsoever. He just lives life to the fullest--without a care in the world--so opposite of myself. All I do is worry. I'm working on this issue--trying to live one day at a time--it may take some work to get there. LOL

Nothing yet on Mauvelous, another thing that's been on my mind. I know my editor is very busy so I just have to be patient.

Spent yesterday at the In-Laws again--finished a room completely. Trying to get things organized for an Estate sale. It's a lot of work. Once we have that done, the house can go on the market. I just want to be finished. I pray we'll be done before April, when I have to promote my first print book, Fire & Ice. !

I'm in a positive place right now and I plan to stay there--yes, I will be a BEST-SELLING AUTHOR. I know it!

Have a fantastic day!

Jerri